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    • Mexico City and I.

    • Well, when I was 15 years old I desiced to vomed to Mexico city, because I wanted study medicine and where I used to live the educatiom is very bad.
    • So I moved alone, without my family and started to study in Prepa uno, I knew a lot of very good people in Xochimilco.
    • Xochimilco it's some of the places more beautifull in Mexico City there are a lot of places to hang out, like the trajineras, or the parks.
    • Now I study Medicinein the UNAM but I had to moved again and I don't live in Xochimilco anymore, Now I live in another delegation.
    • I like this city because has a lot of things that you can do to learn about everything!
    • Somethimes is very dangerous, but normaly it's a very good place to visite or to live.

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    • Well, when I was 15 years old I desiced to vomed to Mexico city, because I wanted study medicine and where I used to live the educatiom is very bad.
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    • Well, when I was 15 years old I desiccided to vomed toisit Mexico city, because I wanted to study medicine and where I used to live the educatiom in was very bad.
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    • So I moved alone, without my family and started to study in Prepa uno, I knew a lot of very good people in Xochimilco.
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    • So I moved alone, without my family and started to study in Prepa uno,. I knew a lot of very good people in Xochimilco.
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    • Xochimilco it's some of the places more beautifull in Mexico City there are a lot of places to hang out, like the trajineras, or the parks.
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    • Xochimilco it'has some of the places more beautifull places in Mexico City t. There are a lot of places to hang out, like the trajineras, or the parks.
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    • Now I study Medicinein the UNAM but I had to moved again and I don't live in Xochimilco anymore, Now I live in another delegation.
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    • Now I study Medicine in the UNAM but I had to moved again and I don't live in Xochimilco anymore,. Now I live in another delegation.
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