添削

Title: Laurita Garza Aside of Bravo river At hidden small farm Laurita killed her boyfriend, because he didn't love her and he was going to get married with another girl just he could do it.

Somebody found two dead bodies at back of a plot one of them was called Emilio Guerra the Esthelas' fiance the other body was called Laura Garza the teacher Last time that they met she had called him up (she said:) honey of my soul you can't get married you said you were in love with me it was just a question of waiting You should not to do it what would my family think about?

you can't leave me after I gave you my life don't tell me you don't love me as you loved me before.

I just came to say goodbye Emilio told her I got engaged I don't love you more take it as a experience that happened this time He hadn't noticed that she was armed and his death was very near she took her gun from her purse and she shot him three times finally, Laurita killed herself