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    • Talking a few about me and my life

    • I'm administration student since 2 years ago, i go to the college Monday to Friday.
    • I live in Venezuela, I have so much friends in the university, but, just only is my best friend there, your name is David, my another best friend is a girl called María, she and me to know since 3 years ago in the High School.
    • Actually she and I don't see us since her party's fifteen.
    • She will meet sixteen years between three months.
    • I'm living with my father's and my younger brother that he is sixteen years old, the economy of Venezuela in this moment is so very bad, we eat two times on day.
    • On January of 2017 exactly January 5th I will meet eighteen years that's full age in my country.

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    • I live in Venezuela, I have so much friends in the university, but, just only is my best friend there, your name is David, my another best friend is a girl called María, she and me to know since 3 years ago in the High School.
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    • I live in Venezuela,. I have so muchany friends in the university, b. But, just only is my best is friend there, your. His name is David, m. My another best friend is a girl called María, she and me to know sinceia. She is known to me since the last 3 years ago in the High School.
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    • I'm living with my father's and my younger brother that he is sixteen years old, the economy of Venezuela in this moment is so very bad, we eat two times on day.
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    • I'm living with my father's and my younger brother that hewho¶ is sixteen years old, t. The economy of Venezuela inat this moment is so very bad, w. We eat two times onin a day.
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    • On January of 2017 exactly January 5th I will meet eighteen years that's full age in my country.
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    • On January of 2017 exactly 5th of January 5thof 2017 I will meetbe eighteen years that's full age in my countryold.
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