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- I would like learn English with us, i have knowledge about language but i wanna check my mistakes and learning more

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- I would like learn English with us, i have knowledge about language but i wanna check my mistakes and learning more
  赶紧投票吧！
- I would like to learn English with ~~us, i~~all of you. I have knowledge about this language but iI wannat to check my mistakes and learn~~ing~~ more.
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