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    • When I was eleven years old , I remember that the world was more fun for me , In those days I played with my friends and we didn't have that to think in responsibility the school only and this is very easy also we had unforgettable soccer game with boys to other level I really stranger these moments if I could to back time then I would but is fantasy , today I remebered it because I see my students and their faces I saw me when I had eleven years .

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    • When I was eleven years old , I remember that the world was more fun for me , In those days I played with my friends and we didn't have that to think in responsibility the school only and this is very easy also we had unforgettable soccer game with boys to other level I really stranger these moments if I could to back time then I would but is fantasy , today I remebered it because I see my students and their faces I saw me when I had eleven years .
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    • When I was eleven years old , I remember that the world was more fun for me ,. In those days I played with my friends and we didn't have that to think inabout responsibilityies in the school only and t. This iwas very easy a. Also we had unforgettable soccer games with boys to the other level. I really strangerfeel if these moments if I could be to backrought back in time then I would but ise happy but it is a sort of fantasy , t. Today I remembered it because I see my students and their faces I saw me when I hadwas about eleven years old.
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