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melanie_vi'den mesaj - English

  • What I think about health

    • Hi, I'm a studied who lives in Spain.
    • Now, I'd like to talk about eating unhealthy food because I think it's an important issue nowdays.
    • For me health is something you need to care, you could fall ill if you don't look what you eat or not eat.
  • In my case, I running everyday so I think I'm in great shape.
    • However, I often eat a lot of fast food because I think it's easier than cook your own food.
    • I know that's not healthy and that's the reason I'm trying to eat less junk food.
    • On the other hand, food has changed in the last years and junk food is cheaper and faster than healthy food.
    • Maybe this would change in future or maybe not, but I wish our habits about food can be better than now in the next years.
  • To sum up, we should improve our healthy habits trying to eat more vegetables.

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