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  • the wolf story

    • an old man who was shepher has said: one wolf farrowed in the module in the my corral and that wolf has 3or4 kitten.
  • that wolf secretly trafficed and cared of her kitten at the first.becase she hadnot distorbing for my sheep and for pity,l didnot expel him,but l was full taking care.
  • she went to hunt and she gave one rabit or chicken or sheep for each time.but she did not disturb to my sheeps even 1 time.
  • one time while that wolf didnot,her kittens hunted one of my sheep and killed that.
  • we waited to see what will happen،when she came back and seen this situation,she was angreing and attaked to his kitten and bited and bitten cried and scramed and then she gave his kittens and went.
  • the next day, surprisingly we saw the wolf hunted one sheep and donot kill that and threws that in my corral and came back.
  • it is a wolf by 3 character: voracity,wild,animal but undrestand,if she entrance to live's other, does not bitray to anybody who was shelter to him and she compensates if she hurts and damages.

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    • an old man who was shepher has said: one wolf farrowed in the module in the my corral and that wolf has 3or4 kitten.
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    • an old man who was sheepher has said:¶one wolf farrowed in the module in the my corral and that wolf has 3or4 kitten.
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  • 문장 2
    • that wolf secretly trafficed and cared of her kitten at the first.becase she hadnot distorbing for my sheep and for pity,l didnot expel him,but l was full taking care.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
  • 문장 3
    • she went to hunt and she gave one rabit or chicken or sheep for each time.but she did not disturb to my sheeps even 1 time.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
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  • 문장 5
    • we waited to see what will happen،when she came back and seen this situation,she was angreing and attaked to his kitten and bited and bitten cried and scramed and then she gave his kittens and went.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5
  • 문장 6
    • the next day, surprisingly we saw the wolf hunted one sheep and donot kill that and threws that in my corral and came back.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 6
  • 문장 7
    • it is a wolf by 3 character: voracity,wild,animal but undrestand,if she entrance to live's other, does not bitray to anybody who was shelter to him and she compensates if she hurts and damages.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 7