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- this is my first wirting
- hi everybody my name is yasser i am egyptain man i am 40 years old please help my to how to speak english

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- hi everybody my name is yasser i am egyptain man i am 40 years old please help my to how to speak english
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- hiHi, everybody m. My name is yYasser ~~i am~~, I am an egyptain man i. I am 40 years old p. Please, help m~~y to how to~~e speaking english.
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- hHi every~~body~~one, my name is yYasser ~~i a~~and I come from eEgypt~~ain man i~~. I am 40 years old p. Please help mye to ~~how to speak english~~improve my english speaking and writting.
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- hHi everybody m! My name is yYasser i, I am ean Egyptaian man i. I am 40 years old p. Please help mye to ~~how to speak e~~improve my English.
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- hiHi, everybody m. My name is yYasser ~~i am egyptain man i am 40~~ , and I am a forty-years -old ~~please help my to how to speak e~~Egyptian man. Please help me improve my speaking skills in English.
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