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نص من - English

    • Write your letter of application for a advertisement of work.

    • Dear Pitt, My name is John Smith and I have come across your advertisement of job in computer shop at weekends.
  • I am very interested in it for several reasons.
    • At first, I love all types of videogames by every console and I am expert on these issues, moreover I keep contact with several videogames designer.
    • The second reason, since I am a young child I like fix and repair devices.
    • And I have experience on working this area.
    • I own advance computer knowledge as a programmer and I always wish work on this area.
    • The third reason it’s I like communicate with people and I deal with them easily and solve with difficult situation.
    • What is more on this work I will keep in contact with people and I will develop my skills far more.
    • I have flexible schedule and I am easy going and friendly, with good mood and talkative.
    • Good afternoon, Yours sincerely, John Smith.

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