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- One year in the uk
- One year of training in the UK I'm backing to France for few days now, see all family and friends and celebrate my birthday properly.
- So if anyone wants to catch me I'll be on knecs' refreshment stall on Saturday coming up! see y'all soon my mates

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- One year in the uk
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- One year of training in the UK I'm backing to France for few days now, see all family and friends and celebrate my birthday properly.
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- One year of training in the UK ~~I'm~~. I am going back~~ing~~ to France for a few days now, to see ~~all~~my family and friends, and to celebrate my birthday ~~proper~~grandly.
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- So if anyone wants to catch me I'll be on knecs' refreshment stall on Saturday coming up! see y'all soon my mates
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- So, if anyone wants to ~~catch me I'~~meet me. I will be ~~on k~~at Knecs' rRefreshment sStall on coming Saturday ~~coming up! s~~. See y'ou all soon my ~~mates~~friends.
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