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  • Computers

    • This is the first time that I write something in this page and to be honest, I have no idea what to write, so I decided to write something about computers.
    • Computers are to me, the best thing humans have made ever, because nowdays the biggest part of our tasks regard of this tool.
    • For example, bank, bussines, buy on Internet, meet people in other countries.

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    • This is the first time that I write something in this page and to be honest, I have no idea what to write, so I decided to write something about computers.
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    • This is the first time that I am writeing something in this page and to be honest, I have no idea what to write, so I decided to write something about computers.
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    • Computers are to me, the best thing humans have made ever, because nowdays the biggest part of our tasks regard of this tool.
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    • Computers are to me, the best thing humans have made ever, because nowadays the biggest part of our tasks regard of this tool.
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    • Computers are tofor me, the best thing that humans have made everever made, because nowadays the biggest part of our tasks regard of this toolquire this machine.
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    • Computers are to me,for me are the best thing humans have made everever made, because nowadays the biggest part of our tasks regard of this toolquires this machine.
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