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  • My dream

    • When I was younger I always dreamed of become a one of the most famous singer in the world.
    • But my parents don't able to my dream.They always say "First you must learn a lot".
  • It was so hard but I never gave up.
    • When I was older and I started deciding how I live my life I competed in a singing competition.
    • Succeedfully I won.
    • I always wins every day because I don't give up.
  • Fulfill your dreams!

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