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  • My studying career

    • I have been living Australia for two and half years, perth is a beautiful place which made a good impresstion for me, people with good characters such as politeness and enthusitic that is very good for me to learn. on the ohter hand, I had never seen the Vietnamese and Malayisan before in Hong Kong, Malayisan as a good object of learning brcause thay are very kind and running their business very hard.
    • Even from Vietnamese, they are very brilliant and finding a lot of ways to slove some problems.
  • It is worth to follow their characters.
    • Actually they are my boss.
    • My school like a national school because a lot of students from oversea, although they are all from the other countries with diffient accents of specking, but I am getting used to it and understand what they mean.
    • I am so happy, my teacher said that she had noticed a big improvement in my English.
    • I still have three more months of my course, when I finish my English course, I am going to study a specialised course of banking and management. it is a long way in the furture.

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    • I have been living Australia for two and half years, perth is a beautiful place which made a good impresstion for me, people with good characters such as politeness and enthusitic that is very good for me to learn. on the ohter hand, I had never seen the Vietnamese and Malayisan before in Hong Kong, Malayisan as a good object of learning brcause thay are very kind and running their business very hard.
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    • I have been living in Australia for the last two and half years, p. Perth is a beautiful place which made a good impresstion for me, pat me.People with good characters such as politeness and enthusiastic that, which is very good for me to learn. oOn the ohther hand, I had never seen the Vietnamese and Malayisians before in Hong Kong,. Malayisian ais a good object ofor learning brecause thaey are very kind and are running their business very hardly.
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    • My school like a national school because a lot of students from oversea, although they are all from the other countries with diffient accents of specking, but I am getting used to it and understand what they mean.
      赶紧投票吧！
    • My school is like a national school because it has a lot of students from overseas, although they are all from the other countries with diffierent accents of speckingech, but I am getting used to it and understand what they mean.
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    • I still have three more months of my course, when I finish my English course, I am going to study a specialised course of banking and management. it is a long way in the furture.
      赶紧投票吧！
    • I still have three more months of my course, w. When I finish my English course, I am going to study a specialiszed course of banking and management. iIt is a very long way in the furture.
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