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    • human valuse,past and persent

    • hi if you allow me I want answer to your question by some question were not there in the past people who was slaves for money or power?!
    • were not there people who did not obey for power?!
    • were not there people how was give other used slave?!
    • as you can see it subject is a stereotype and do not revelance for now and at the past existence and countinue by passing time.
    • but if we want seeing to this subje by fair we can find out this is very important and not at all stereotype.
    • mybe and sure writing thousands book about this subject.but come to seeing diffrent to that there are always foolish human.and it is donot relation to cultor or race.but this made by training and promotions.
    • ((even you are a cow،there are still people to worship you )) sorry for my example so judge other person not important and nonly 1 thing is important.
    • the valubale gold in your that you have tride to get that.no human can not proud of the things donot attemp to get them.social situation maked of family or race,possession is play story,beauty face function of genetics,...
    • but realy value have a commone point: ((a human combat for giving that)) patient,scince,wisdom,kind,....
    • polit polit polit ((polit is very important for me and repet that)) sorry for my mistake thank for your time bye

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    • hi if you allow me I want answer to your question by some question were not there in the past people who was slaves for money or power?!
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    • hi¶iHi !¶If you allow me I want to answer to your question by some questions which were not there in the past- people who wasere slaves for money or power? !
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    • hi¶iHi! ¶If you allow me I want answer to your question bywith some question¶ws. Were there not therpeople in the past people who wasere slaves forto money or were hungry for power?!
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    • as you can see it subject is a stereotype and do not revelance for now and at the past existence and countinue by passing time.
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    • ¶aAs you can see it is a subject is a stereotype and dohas not revellevance for now and at the past existenced and countinued by passing time.
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    • ¶aAs you can see it subject, this is a stereotype and do not revelance for now and at the past existence and countinue by passing timeical view. A person’s worth has always been judged according to social status and material possessions.
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    • but if we want seeing to this subje by fair we can find out this is very important and not at all stereotype.
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    • ¶bBut if we want seeing to to see this subject by fairness then we can find out that this is very important and not at all a stereotype.
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    • ¶but if we want seeing to this subje by fair we can find out this is very important and not at all stereotypHowever, if we consider this subject from a different viewpoint, we can see that material success is very important in life.
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    • mybe and sure writing thousands book about this subject.but come to seeing diffrent to that there are always foolish human.and it is donot relation to cultor or race.but this made by training and promotions.
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    • ¶mMaybe and surely, writing thousands of books about this subject.b But coame to seeing different to that¶thereces which are always made by foolish human.as. And it is donot relationed to cultorure or race.b But this is made by training and promotions.
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    • ¶mybe and sure writingAlthough thousands of book about this subject.but come to seeing diffrent tohave been written on the morality of money, I invite you to see that there arhave always been foolish human.and it is donot relation to cultor or race.but this made by training and promotionspeople irrespective of race or culture. Good qualities in people can only be cultivated with education and encouragement.
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    • ((even you are a cow،there are still people to worship you )) sorry for my example so judge other person not important and nonly 1 thing is important.
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    • ((eEven you are a cow،there are still people to worship you¶))¶sSorry for my example¶sSo judgeing other is person not important and nonly 1one thing is important.
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    • ((evenIf you are a cow,،there are still people to worship you¶))¶sorry for my example¶s. Therefore it is not wise to judge othera person not important and nonly 1 thing is importantby the norms of a today's society.
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    • the valubale gold in your that you have tride to get that.no human can not proud of the things donot attemp to get them.social situation maked of family or race,possession is play story,beauty face function of genetics,...
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    • ¶tThe valubable gold in your¶that hand¶which you have trided to get that.n. No human can not be proud of the things that dono't attempt to get them.s Social situation maked ofs family or race,possession is a play story,beauty face function of genetics,...
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    • ¶the valubaleThere is no shame in having gold in your hand that you have tride to get that.nworked for. No human can notbe proud of the things doif he or she made not attempt to get them.s Social situation maked oftatus of your family or, race, possession is play story,s tell a story whilst a beautyiful face function of genetics,..is a gift of your genes.
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    • but realy value have a commone point: ((a human combat for giving that)) patient,scince,wisdom,kind,....
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    • ¶but realy value have a commone point:¶((a human combat for giving that))¶patient,scincThat being said, the universal values are patience, knowledge, wisdom, kind,....ness and
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    • polit polit polit ((polit is very important for me and repet that)) sorry for my mistake thank for your time bye
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    • ¶pPolit¶pe¶Polit¶pe¶Polite¶((Being polite is very important for me and I repeat that))¶sorry for my mistakes¶thanks for your time¶bye
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    • polit¶polit¶polit¶((polit is very important for me and repet that))¶sorry for my mistake¶thank for your time¶byeeness.
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