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  • Essay - Describing a place. Thanks a lot for correcting me!

    • Endless skyscrapers rising to the dark sky, bright lights of billboards illuminating the street, hundreds of extraordinary stylish people hanging out together – all these you can see while walking on the night Broadway.
    • It may first frighten you if you came from a small provincial town as me.
    • But in an hour you won’t pay attention to the noise: Broadway will swallow you fully.
    • The street stands out in my memory quite vividly.
  • I still remember my favorite “Applebee’s” where I had left most of my money, and the red title “Band of America” at every corner.
    • Talented actors-dancers near every theatre invite passersby to their shows.
    • Desire to visit a Broadway performance will definitely embrace you because exciting advertisings are everywhere.
  • Giant posters of new films and signboards of most famous boutiques are hanging on both sides.
  • It will lead you right to the M&M’s Store with a two-storey transparent window.
  • And here it is – the Time’s Square.
    • Whether it’s a day of a night, the Square is always full of life and movement.
  • But the heart of the place is, of course, the fabulous Hard Rock Café.
    • It’s impossible to pass by it without looking inside.
    • After long walking it’s time to sit down on those huge steps, another sight of Broadway, and have a look at the whole picture of the street.
  • This wonderful breathtaking spectacle will be remembered forever.
    • It’s already been nearly two years since my walking down Broadway but I still remember every face I met, every smell I felt, every sound I heard.

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