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    • A Trip to Brussel

    • A month ago i went to Brussel for two days.
    • I took the bus to go there.
    • During the second day of my trip i visited Harry Potter The Exhibition.
    • Then i did some shopping the afternoon.
    • I brought several things such as clothes, comics, figurines.
    • This trip was fun, i really enjoyed the city.
    • I wish to go back to Brussel some day.

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