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Poruka od Schlum - English

    • The next chapter of this story

    • Do you asking your-self what is a title of this story ?
    • I begin to write in Winter, when snow falls on the ground some years ago.
  • I needed a hero in my life. My own hero.
    • Well, I'm thinking at his surname : the Flocon.
  • (You know, Flocon in French it's the little star who makes snow!).
  • A great title for my hero.
  • What powers and abilities can he have with this name ?
  • You will know soon...

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English