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    • In the first instance my expectations were face to the internship an insight in the tourism business.
  • Furthermore, I wanted to test my language skills in English and French.
    • In general, I was interested how the management of a company proceed because you never know how much work this implies.
    • But I wanted also to have an insight in the job of a hotel practitioner to find out if this job is appropriate for me.
  • Moreover, I wanted to learn new things and try to implement the learned theory in practice.
    • It was important for me to have customer contact, to see, if I am able to handle with strangers.
  • I expected a great working atmosphere due to the ability to work in a team which is one of the most important focal point in the hotel industry

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    • In the first instance my expectations were face to the internship an insight in the tourism business.
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    • In the first instance my expectations were face toto get an insight from the internship an insight in the tourism business.
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    • In general, I was interested how the management of a company proceed because you never know how much work this implies.
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    • In general, I was interested how the management of a company proceeds because you never know how much workimportance this implies.
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    • But I wanted also to have an insight in the job of a hotel practitioner to find out if this job is appropriate for me.
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    • But I also wanted also to have an insight in the job of a hotel practitioner to find out if this job is appropriate for me.
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    • It was important for me to have customer contact, to see, if I am able to handle with strangers.
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    • It was important for me to have customer contact, to see, if I am able to handle different situations with strangers.
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    • I expected a great working atmosphere due to the ability to work in a team which is one of the most important focal point in the hotel industry
      투표하세요!
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