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  • Chinese Garden

    • Chinese Garden is a spacial vision which has a long history more than three thousand years .
    • It was not only a place for the enjoyment of the royal members, but also be as a private Garden for the officials to get rid of the lively outside.
    • These gardens have created a micro-scence in which a thought of human should make friend with nature is expressed.
    • There will be a wall surrounding in the typical Chinese garden.
    • There are pools, hill imitating, trees, grass, flowers and constructions consisted of kinds of paths and lorridge inside the garden.
    • When wandering in the garden, people can see a series of vision which is design delicately like a landscape painting roll being opened in the present of eyes.

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    • It was not only a place for the enjoyment of the royal members, but also be as a private Garden for the officials to get rid of the lively outside.
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    • It was not only a place for the enjoyment of the royal members, but also be as a private Garden for the officials to get rid of the livelycrowd outside.
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    • These gardens have created a micro-scence in which a thought of human should make friend with nature is expressed.
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    • These gardens have created a micro-scencse in which a thought of human shoulds makeing friendship with the nature is expressed.
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    • There are pools, hill imitating, trees, grass, flowers and constructions consisted of kinds of paths and lorridge inside the garden.
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    • There are the pools, hill imitating, trees, grass, flowers and constructions consisteding of different kinds of paths and lorbridges inside the garden.
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    • When wandering in the garden, people can see a series of vision which is design delicately like a landscape painting roll being opened in the present of eyes.
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    • Whilen wandering in the garden, people can see a series of vision which is designed delicately like a landscape; painting roll being opened in the presentce of eyes.
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