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    • My teenage

    • I spent most of my time in studying in my teenage when I was in high school.
  • My mom kept telling me that the economy is getting better and better in China.
    • They are going to develop fast and well, and the students there will be so competitive that might threaten our opportunities of work.
    • Hearing my mom's words I decided to study hard for entering a Senior High School which is in a good fame, then be enrolled in a well-known national university.
    • I did enter a great Senior High.
  • What's more, I've met my best friends in my life.
    • We all lived in the dormitory and we chatted all the nights, we had fun and did sports on the field, sharing every single moment in our life.
    • We still keep in touch after graduating.
    • For me, the time then was the best time in my teenage, and I appreciate it and cherish it.
    • Eventually I did not apply to a national college but a private one because of me playing too much rather than studying.
    • Nevertheless, I paid more attention on my study while at college because I did not forget the kind reminder from my mom, to be competitive for finding a good job in the future.
    • Finally, I am still happy with my teenage spending much of the time with my beloved friends, which makes me grow up happily and strongly.

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