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    • my history in learning

    • I am kevin Leandre from Rwanda I have 31 years old and I am finalist student at University of lay Adventists of Kigali in Rwanda.
    • I was learned different course before starting to Learn University school.
    • I were learned about security and Driving a care after that I was continue to learn in University about Economic sciences and management in Accounting Option therefore I was passed all course with overcome and also English course with high marks so know I don't know English.
    • This is my history in learning school thank you for your correction

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    • I am kevin Leandre from Rwanda I have 31 years old and I am finalist student at University of lay Adventists of Kigali in Rwanda.
      투표하세요!
    • I am kKevin Leandre from Rwanda. I haveam 31 years old and I am finalist student at University of lLay Adventists of Kigali in Rwanda.
      투표하세요!
    • I am kevin Leandre from Rwanda. I haveam 31 years old and I am a finalist student at the University of lay Adventists of Kigali in Rwanda.
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    • I were learned about security and Driving a care after that I was continue to learn in University about Economic sciences and management in Accounting Option therefore I was passed all course with overcome and also English course with high marks so know I don't know English.
      투표하세요!
    • I were learned about security and Ddriving a care a. After that I was continued to learn in the University about Economic sciences and management in Accounting Option therefore I was passed all course with overcomestream. Thereafter I passed all the subjects with good marks and also English course with high marks s. So know I don't know English well.
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