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  • Essay about new technologies

    • During a recent class discussion your teacher made the following statement: Modern technologies have given us access to vast amount of information.
  • However, in general we use information for entertainment, not for practical purposes.
    • Your teacher has now asked you to write an essay on the subject, saying how far you agree with the statement.
  • Modern technologies are a key point in the 21st century.
  • In fact, they have changed our world.
  • We may use them to obtain information or for entertainment.
  • More than that, this period of time has been coined the Knowledge Age because of modern technologies.
    • In this essay I will explore if people use ICT s more for having fun or with practical aims.
  • Let us begin by clarifying what the concept of new technologies means.
    • It deals with a list of technological devices which are used as a source of information, a tool of job or study or communicate among people or simply for having fun.
    • Some examples are computers, mobiles, tablets, IPOD´s, consoles and so on.
    • Another important point is these devices are changing all the time because of the science.
    • I want to say that the most modern mobile today will be thought old dated in three months.
    • On the one hand, modern technologies make easier our lives.
    • For example, the first time we go somewhere we can find the place without problems thanks to a GPS or when we have to elaborate an essay is much easier to do today than twenty years ago thanks to Internet and a word processor.
    • However, this importance of ICTS may lead to an addiction.
  • We do not know how to live without them.
  • For instance, in my personal case it would be really hard for me to spend a whole week without using my mobile or my computer.
  • On the other hand, new technologies give us so many possibilities that they are overused.
    • Above all, people who have too much free time.
    • It is important to consider that children are familiar with ICTs from the first years of their lives.
    • What is more they are considered digital natives.
  • Children and teenager may spend the whole day using new technologies for entertainment.
  • This fact may be dangerous without the supervision of an adult.
    • For this reason, teachers and family should control and supervise the use and the time kids are with new technologies.
  • In conclusion, we have seen that modern technologies have a wide variety of uses and depending on the situation of every person they may be used with practical purposes or for entertainment.
  • It is a great idea to deal with the good use of technologies since the childhood.

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