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  • Hello.
  • Tôt-tô-chan liked her school.
    • She had many secret things in there.
    • She took a train to school and she had many different beautiful dreams.
    • She wanted become a train ticket collector, a dancer, a singer, a doctor,...
  • She had a best friend. It was a dog.
    • Its name is Rocky.
  • They played with each other.
    • She had many friends at school.
  • One day, one of her best friends at school died.
    • He was the first friend and the best friend of Tôt-tô-chan, And many story about Tôt-tô-chan.
  • Now I'll tell you about Doraemon and his friends.
    • Doraemon is a cat robot. He is smart.
    • He comes from Century 22 and return Century 21 by Time Machine.
    • He comes to Nobita's family and helps him to be better.
  • They can change the future.
  • Doraemon had many friends: Nobita, Shizuka, Suneo, Jaian, Dorami - his sister,...
    • They play with each other.
  • Nobita is stupid but sometimes, he is very smart.
    • His score at school always is zero.
  • Shizuka is smart.
    • She learns very good at school. Suneo is rich.
    • He always swanky with everybody.
    • Jaian wants become a singer but he sing very terrible. Okay.
  • Goodbye and see you again.

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