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  • Animal or human

  • we see the animal killed for he needed to food do not kill for nothing or show the force but we see wars human together no for eat food or live but for the money and have more earth and things not needed her. he kill the childrens and oldsters and the womans for that because he have cold and hard heart i think he become animal today and animal name human .

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    • we see the animal killed for he needed to food do not kill for nothing or show the force but we see wars human together no for eat food or live but for the money and have more earth and things not needed her. he kill the childrens and oldsters and the womans for that because he have cold and hard heart i think he become animal today and animal name human .
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