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- I will write about some things i did her in last year .
- Went to new college because i was i study thing not this now . i got on new friends and doctors i am so happy with them .
- I feel changed more for better .
- It will was thing so good in my life .

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- I will write about some things i did her in last year .
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- Went to new college because i was i study thing not this now . i got on new friends and doctors i am so happy with them .
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- Went to a new college because iI was i study thing ~~not this now~~ things. iI got onsome new friends and doctors i. I am so happy with them .
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- ~~Went to~~In new college ~~because~~ i was ito study thing ~~not this now .~~s and along it i got on new friends and doctors ~~i am so happy with them~~ which make me feel very happy.
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- I feel changed more for better .
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- I feel change~~d more for~~ is much better¶.
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- I feel changed ~~more for~~and it is better¶.
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- It will was thing so good in my life .
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- It w~~ill was thing~~as so good in my life .
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