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  • Black swan

    • Today i learned new termin, which sounds as "black swan".
    • "Black swan" this is the theory about hardly predictable events, which have significant aftereffect .Examples of "black swans" are events such as first world war, attack of the twin towers and implementation and development of the Internet.

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