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- Hey my name is Roma. i'm 19. i like rock music cook eat and read book.
- One years ago i wanted go to english because i learn english language.

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- Hey my name is Roma. i'm 19. i like rock music cook eat and read book.
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- Hey my name is Roma. iI'm 19 years old. iI like listening to rock music, cooking, eating and reading books.
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- Hey m. My name is Roma. iI'm ~~19. i like~~nineteen. I like listening to rock music, cook ~~eat~~ing, eating, and reading books.
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- Hey m! My name is Roma. iI'm 19. iI like rock music, cook ~~eat~~ing, eating, and reading books.
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- One years ago i wanted go to english because i learn english language.
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- One years ago iI wanted ~~go to english because i~~to go for English classes because I wanted to learn eEnglish language.
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- ~~One~~A years ago iI wanted ~~go to english because i~~to start learn eing English ~~language.~~ .
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- ~~One~~Last year~~s ago i~~, I wanted go to eEngl~~ish~~and because iI wanted to learn eEnglish ~~language~~.
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