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Testo da Clairoudoudou - English

  • Cover letter

    • Dear Madam, Dear Sir, I am currently doing an apprenticeship in pastry at the center of formation of apprentices in Vannes, France.
    • For my experience it will be very enriching to have work experience in your company.
    • The education I received within the framework of my training allowed me to acquire the autonomy as well as numerous knowledge in the field of the pastry.
    • I am motivated, serious, independent, and curious about novelty and attached to discover new horizons.
    • Indeed, I wish I can continue to learn my job while discovering a new country, another culture.
    • I know this is a great opportunity for me to live in your country and improve my knowledge for few months.
    • I would be very grateful if you would agree to give me a placement in your company at the beginning of September for duration of six months.
    • Work experience in an other country would enable me to gain some others knowledge in pastry.
    • Your faithfully,

PER FAVORE, AIUTA A CORREGGERE OGNI FRASE! - English