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  • It lasts all day, from 9:00 a.m. to 7:00 p.m.
    • The origins of Carnival are Afro-Caribbean to celebrate the abolition of slavery.
  • So the music is exotic and the food is traditional Caribbean food.
  • Before, the police tried to ban the festival because they had a negative view.
  • But now, this carnival is proof of the successful integration of black immigrants in England.
    • The parade went around the neighborhood, about five kilometers, and is closed to traffic for two days.
  • Two metro stations are closed.
  • The parade passes a jury notes the groups and makes a ranking.

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