添削

添削のお手伝いをしましょう！修正済み

Hsanzからのテキスト - English

  • My life

    • i was studying in a economy college, but 3 years later i decided to change my carreer, Now Im studying in Merchant Marine School, i am in my last year.
    • At this period i will be on board for ten months, my expectatives are travel around to the world, meet a lot of people know their cultures, food, hobbies, etc

添削の手助けをお願いします！ - English