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Text from misangocle08022004 - English

    • Please correct my mistakes.Thank you very much.

    • Hello.
    • I had a foster mother.
  • Her name is Bich Huyen.
    • She is Vietnamese but she lives in the USA.
    • She had a husband with 2 daughters.
    • Her daughters graduated Yale University.
  • They are beautiful and friendly.
    • They helped many people in the world.
    • They donated books for many small library in Vietnam.
  • They opened QQ Books Foundation.
    • Every year, QQ Books Foudation donated a lot of money to the poor but good students.
    • And this year, they donated some money to the poor but good students of my province, Ninh Binh.
    • My mission is find some students like that and give them some money for their school year.
    • And I found the first person.
    • Yesterday, I went to his house.
  • His name is Binh.
    • He lives with his grandma.
    • His father and mother divorced so he is poor.
    • He is a great student.
    • He had many prices of many competitions and many great scores.
    • He and his grandma lives in a small house as a small room.
    • His grandma was old but she was very smart.
    • She proud of her great nephew and she said she can sell the house to earn money for him study.
    • She cried much and she said last time, he asked her to buy a small cellphone but she refused with the reason they didn't have money to buy it.
  • She thought it wasn't important for him.
  • The important things for him now are the books, the notebooks, the pens, the rulers,...
    • So she promised when they'll abounding, she'll buy a cellphone for him.
    • His father didn't subsidize money for him to study because his father thought don't need to learn more, after study secondary school, must at home to work. Binh was sad.
    • But his grandma supported him to learn more so he kept to learn good.
    • Yesterday when I went there, she cried much and she thrilled very much.
    • I gave him 1 millions VND.
    • Afterthat, I sat down the bed, next to his grandma.
    • His house just had 2 glass so they used them to invited me and my mom.
  • They didn't have any glass of water.
    • Then me and my mom returned our house.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English