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The last pharaoh
- Once I went to the vally of the kings and I saw something strang it was the last pharaoh walked behind me..

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- Once I went to the vally of the kings and I saw something strang it was the last pharaoh walked behind me..
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- Once I went to the vally of the kings and I saw something strange, it was the last pharaoh walkeding behind me..
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- Once I went to the vally of the kings and I saw something strang it was the last pharaoh ~~walked beh~~followindg me..
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- Once I went to the valley of ~~the~~ kings and I saw something strang ~~it was t~~e. The lLast pharaoh walked behind me..
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