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    • Jakob was absolutely furious when he saw what was going on outs

  • Jakob was absolutely furious when he saw what was going on outside his window.
    • Two teenagers were trying to stealing his new motorbike.
    • It was midday but it didn’t matter the thieves they were cutting chains and locks and they also were turning on the motorbike.
    • Jakob was surprised and angry he went out running he saw them while he was screaming and cursing them too.
    • When teenagers realized the situation they started running but they could not run with the motorbike too.
    • So they threw it to floor and escaped when Jakob arrived his motorbike had suffered some damage but he got recover it.
  • He didn’t know who they were but he was very upset and suffered an uncomfortable moment.
    • Some weeks later the local newspapers reported that police officers had caught a group of four teenagers who had been stealing and making damage in the city last two months.

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    • It was midday but it didn’t matter the thieves they were cutting chains and locks and they also were turning on the motorbike.
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    • It was midday but it didn’t matter to the thieves, they were cutting chains and locks and they also were turning on the motorbike.
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    • It was midday but it didn’t matter to the thieves t. They were cutting chains and locks and they also were turning on the motorbikethe lock and chains off the bike and they were also starting it up.
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    • Jakob was surprised and angry he went out running he saw them while he was screaming and cursing them too.
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    • Jakob was surprised and angry, so he went out running and he saw them while h. He was screaming and cursing at them too.
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    • When teenagers realized the situation they started running but they could not run with the motorbike too.
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    • When the teenagers realized the situation they were in, they started running but they could not run with the motorbike too.
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    • So they threw it to floor and escaped when Jakob arrived his motorbike had suffered some damage but he got recover it.
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    • So they threw it to the floor and escaped w. When Jakob arrived his motorbike had suffered some damage but he gotmanaged to recover it.
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    • So they threw it to floorthe ground and escaped w. When Jakob arrived, his motorbike had suffered some damage but he got'd managed to recover it.
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    • Some weeks later the local newspapers reported that police officers had caught a group of four teenagers who had been stealing and making damage in the city last two months.
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    • Some weeks later, the local newspapers reported that police officers had caught a group of four teenagers who had been stealing and makcausing damage in the city during the last two months.
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    • Some weeks later, the local newspapers reported that police officers had caught a group of four teenagers who had been stealing and makcausing damage into the city lfor the past two months.
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