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Text from Orpheos - English

  • My last holidays

    • A month ago, I went in London, , for my first trip alone.
    • At the start, I was a bit afraid, acknowledge that my english skills need to be improved...
    • I couldn't stop thinking that people would laugh at me if I spoke, because of my mistakes and my accent.
  • Thereafter, somehow I began to overcome my fears, and communicate with people.
    • I even came out making really good friends and remembrances.
    • London has gave me two lessons to ponder.
    • First, you should not care about the other opinion, especially when you are at you best.
    • And second, that earth is full a people just wait to amazed you.

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