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    • There is a girl.
  • Her name is Pam.
  • She lives on a farm with her parents.
    • She had 2 big horses.
    • She always takes them to water.
    • She can do every farm works.
  • She can look after the pigs and help to milk the cows.
    • Peter and Jane go to school with Pam.
  • Sometimes, they have tea time together.
  • They drink tea and eat cake.
  • They walk around the farm.
  • They ride the horses.
    • They take some apples to the horses.
  • They see the pigs.
  • Pam's father gives the pigs something to eat.
    • There are some baby pigs and big pigs.
    • Peter wants to look at the fish.
  • He gives them something to eat.
    • Pam's mother takes some eggs to Jane's mother.
  • Those are big eggs.
  • Peter and Jane go out the sea on a boat with their friend, Tom.
    • Peter can fish.
    • Tom helps them to get some big fish for tea.
    • Tom talks about the sea, the boats, the fish.
  • Peter and Jane must come home.
    • They meet their friends in their city.
  • Peter plays with Bob.
  • Jane plays with Mary and her doll, Ann.
    • The next day, they have a tea party at home.

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