Korektoj

HELPU KOREKTI NUN!Ne korektita

Text from Sara_m - English

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Versio Korektita

Something
Sometimes I just want to run and never stop...
- This were the first words I heard him pronounced, and after all this time I can not forget the smile in his face, that smile that I learnt to hate.

Sara_mJuly 2016Voĉdoni nun!
- Raporti kiel spamo?

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

Titolo
- Something
  Voĉdoni nun!
- ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Titolo
Frazo 1
- Sometimes I just want to run and never stop...
  Voĉdoni nun!
- ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 1
Frazo 2
- This were the first words I heard him pronounced, and after all this time I can not forget the smile in his face, that smile that I learnt to hate.
  Voĉdoni nun!
- Thisese were the first words I heard him ~~pronounced, and a~~say. After all this time I can not forget the smile in his face, that smile that I learnted to hate.
  MaverickMom Comments 1
  
  Raporti kiel spamo?
  
  Voĉdoni nun!
- Thisese were the first words I heard him ~~pronounced, and a~~say. After all this time ~~I can~~had passed, I still could not forget the smile ion his face~~, that~~...the smile that I'd learnted to hate.
  Mithrawnurro Comments
  
  Raporti kiel spamo?
  
  Voĉdoni nun!
- ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 2