Rédigé par misangocle08022004 - English
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- Hello.
- Today, I'm very happy to tell you about a story.
- There is a family with four members.
- Peter is Jane's elder brother.
- Their mom comes in their rooms to make them get up.
- They plan they're out in sun.
- They meet their friends.
- They play with a ball.
- One of them throw the ball into the water so they ask a fisherman for the boat to catch the ball.
- They play in water.
- Some of them play with the ball and others sit in the sunshine.
- Jane jumps into the water.
- She likes that.
- In the afternoon, they walk down the street. they walk though a pet store.
- Some polices fix a little part of the street.
- They play with there friends more and more.
- Their mom said with them that don't be wet when you come home.
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