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  • The Great Depression

    • The great depression was an economic crisis which took place in the USA in the 1930s.
    • The staple causes of this economic catastrophe were the unequality of wealth between rich and working classes , the pressing stock market's speculation and expecially the overproduction of needs which people couldn't afford theese facts brought to the concept of ' buying now and paying later'.
  • At the end of this decade rich people stopped investing their money and poor people stopped buying things because they weren't able to pay the interests.
    • As a result it brought the well known 'great depression' which caused unemployment and mass suicide.

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    • The staple causes of this economic catastrophe were the unequality of wealth between rich and working classes , the pressing stock market's speculation and expecially the overproduction of needs which people couldn't afford theese facts brought to the concept of ' buying now and paying later'.
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    • The staple causes of this economic catastrophe were the uinequality of wealth between the rich and the working classes , the pressing stock market's speculation and exspecially the overproduction of needs which people couldn't afford theese facts brought to the concept of ' buying now and paying later'.
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    • The staple causes of this economic catastrophe were the unequality of wealth between the rich and working classes , the pressing speculation of the stock market's speculation and expeciallyrformance, and the overproduction of neegoods, which the people couldn't afford theese facts brought to . Thus ¶the concept of ' buying now and paying later' arose.
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    • At the end of this decade rich people stopped investing their money and poor people stopped buying things because they weren't able to pay the interests.
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