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- Today is a good day for me, i win may game and i scored one beautiful goal

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- Today is a good day for me, i win may game and i scored one beautiful goal
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- Today is a good day for me, i wion ~~may~~the game and i scored one beautiful goal
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- Today is a good day for me, iI wion may game and iI scored one beautiful goal.
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- Today iwas a good day for me~~, i~~. I wion may game and iI scored one beautiful goal.
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- Today is a good day for me, i win may game and i scored one beautiful goal¶¶Today has been a good day for me, i won my game and i scored a beautiful goal.
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- Today is a good day for me, i win may game and i scored one beautiful goal¶¶Today is a good day for me. I win my game and I scored a beautiful goal.
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- Today is a good day for me~~, i win may game~~. I have won and i scored ~~one~~a beautiful goal in my game.
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