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    • hello dear friends how are you i would like to tell you about a real story which happend to me before 3 years i was watching a bad film in other words a film which has a lot of bad scens of kissing an so on you know what i mean i was watching it while people were praying fajr and i live close to the mosque i heard them reading the coran yes from my room and said to myself no its chame for me after that i changed the channel to watch a religious show in iqraa channel immediately after i changed it i heard mostapha hosni saying [ you who changed the channel you were watching a film or whatever who helped to change it its allah allah is the one who help us to do good things in our life] i was schocked i cant express to you my fellings and i start crying then i decided to go to fagr prayer i cant describe how much am happy in that moment however i went to bed to sleep in the same night i dreamt of one of the best dreams of my life i dreamt that i live in the siecle of sahaba i was walking in the souk of sahaba i saw some white faces but i cant remmember how this faces look like but they are very beautiful but surprisingly a men was shouting in the souk saying the prohet muhamad peace be upon him is dying i encourage you to see him before he died its my dream to see the prophet so i run too fast to his house when i opened the door i waked up from this dream i was schocked again i was so close to see the prophet but unfortunately i didnt see him from that day i decided to pray and be commitment to my religion this day was the best day of my life and i will not ever forget it sorry guys its too long topic but i would like share this experience with you sorry again for my poor language and for typping mistakes please give me your immpresions or comments for this story

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    • hello dear friends how are you i would like to tell you about a real story which happend to me before 3 years i was watching a bad film in other words a film which has a lot of bad scens of kissing an so on you know what i mean i was watching it while people were praying fajr and i live close to the mosque i heard them reading the coran yes from my room and said to myself no its chame for me after that i changed the channel to watch a religious show in iqraa channel immediately after i changed it i heard mostapha hosni saying [ you who changed the channel you were watching a film or whatever who helped to change it its allah allah is the one who help us to do good things in our life] i was schocked i cant express to you my fellings and i start crying then i decided to go to fagr prayer i cant describe how much am happy in that moment however i went to bed to sleep in the same night i dreamt of one of the best dreams of my life i dreamt that i live in the siecle of sahaba i was walking in the souk of sahaba i saw some white faces but i cant remmember how this faces look like but they are very beautiful but surprisingly a men was shouting in the souk saying the prohet muhamad peace be upon him is dying i encourage you to see him before he died its my dream to see the prophet so i run too fast to his house when i opened the door i waked up from this dream i was schocked again i was so close to see the prophet but unfortunately i didnt see him from that day i decided to pray and be commitment to my religion this day was the best day of my life and i will not ever forget it sorry guys its too long topic but i would like share this experience with you sorry again for my poor language and for typping mistakes please give me your immpresions or comments for this story
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    • ¶hHello dear friends h. How are you i? I would like to tell you about a real story which happened to me before 3 years i was watching a bad film (in other words a film which has a lot of bad scenes of kissing an so on you know what i mean) ;I i was watching it while people were praying fajir and i live close to the mosque i heard them reading the ckoran yes from my room and said to myself no its cshame for me after that i changed the channel to watch a religious show in iqraa channel immediately after i changed it i heard mostapha hosni saying [ you who changed the channel you were watching a film or whatever who helped to change i, It its allah allah is the one who help us to do good things in our life] i was schocked i cant express to you my feellings and i start crying then i decided to go to fagr prayer i cant describe how much am happy in that moment h. However iI went to bed to sleep in the same night i dreamt of one of the best dreams of my life i. I dreamt that i live in the siecle of sahaba i was walking in the souk of sahaba i saw some white faces but i cant remmember how this faces look like but they are very beautiful but surprisingly a men was shouting in the souk saying the prohet muhamad peace be upon him is dying i encourage you to see him before he died its my dream to see the prophet so i run too fast to his house when i opened the door i waked up from this dream i was schocked again. i was so close to see the prophet but unfortunately i didn't see him from that day i decided to pray and be commitment to my religion this day was the best day of my life and i will not ever forget it. I'm sorry guys its too long topic but i would like share this experience with you sorry again for my poor language and for typping mistakes please give me your immpressions or comments for this story.
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