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    • Telling a story about a trip

    • When I was eleven, my parents, my sister and I travelled in bus from Colombia to Chile.
    • It was a very long trip, since it lasted about seven days.
    • During the trip we crossed two whole countries: Ecuador and Perú.
  • It was a nice experience, although somehow traumatic.
    • Arriving to Santiago after almost seven days travelling by bus was such a relief.
    • Chileans were great hosts to us.
    • They made us feel at home, despite the distance.
    • We returned to Colombia eleven months later, by bus as well, and ever since I have lived wishing to visit Chile again, but this time, I think I'd prefer to do it by plane.

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