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Text from TomasJulian - English

    • Football Tournament

    • Hi everyone, I want to tell a story about our participation in a Olympic Game.
    • Not true Olympic Games, of course.
    • This is about something we did in my High School.
    • Every year my school organize this Olympic Games when everyone can play the sport they like with his classmates and in our case the most important sport was football.
    • All the competitive teams were integrated by the best players of each course but in our course we pose the challenge of integrate our team just with us, without adding anyone outside our classroom but one single player and try to reach as far as we could get.
  • In that team I played as libero (or sweeper) so my position didn't consist in mark a designated opponent, but consisted in command our defense and defend when the stoppers lost their designated marks.
  • Even without being superior than our opponents we managed to get until the final match.
  • This is something remarkable because only the teamwork made it possible.

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