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- Hello
I am from Russia.
- I wasn't traveling in Europe or in the USA.
- I was traveling in the Altai Mountains.
- Its a very beautiful place.
- You can go hiking or ride a horse.
- Many many friendly people and friendly nature

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- Hello
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- Hello ,
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- I am from Russia.
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- I wasn't traveling in Europe or in the USA.
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- I wasn't traveling into Europe or ~~in the~~ USA.
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- I was traveling in the Altai Mountains.
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- I was traveling ~~in the~~to Altai Mountains.
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- Its a very beautiful place.
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- It's a very beautiful place.("Its" means "of this" and "It's" means "it is".)
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- You can go hiking or ride a horse.
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- You can go for hiking or rideing a horse.
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- Many many friendly people and friendly nature
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- Many many friendly people and ~~friendly~~a beautiful nature
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- Many ,many friendly people and ~~friendly~~wonderful nature .
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