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Text from Leo_Barbicha - English

  • correct my email!!

  • Greetings!!
  • My name is Leonardo, I'm from Brazil.
  • I've just sent an e-mail to an American guy, and I would like you guys to take a little bit of your time to correct the email I sent.
  • I need to know if he's gonna have difficult to read my email :P here it is: "Greetings man!
    • if the problem is my phone and there's not much you can do about it, no problem at all I'm not mad at you nor at your developer, I understand the situation.
  • I really appreciate your lessons and I'll keep getting your new Apps for my Tablet haha About the options, I don't need/want a refund, the App worked on my tablet and starting next month I'll try to save some money to get a new Android advice, just as you advised me.
  • Thanks for you attention, I really wasn't expecting to get a response from you so fast, you do really care about your clients. once again...
  • I love your job, you're not only being my martial art teacher, you're also being my "listening" teacher for my English hahaha.
  • Waiting for the "how to use submission for self defense" App if my friends could understand English, I would certainly tell them to purchase your Apps Thanks for your time." thank you!!
  • by the way, you there's someone who wants to practice portuguese out there, just send me a message

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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    • I've just sent an e-mail to an American guy, and I would like you guys to take a little bit of your time to correct the email I sent.
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    • if the problem is my phone and there's not much you can do about it, no problem at all I'm not mad at you nor at your developer, I understand the situation.
      Vote now!
    • ¶iIf the problem is my phone and, there's not much you can do about it,. It's no problem at all.¶I'm not mad at you nor at your developer, I understand the situation.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 5
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    • I really appreciate your lessons and I'll keep getting your new Apps for my Tablet haha About the options, I don't need/want a refund, the App worked on my tablet and starting next month I'll try to save some money to get a new Android advice, just as you advised me.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 6
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    • Thanks for you attention, I really wasn't expecting to get a response from you so fast, you do really care about your clients. once again...
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 7
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    • Waiting for the "how to use submission for self defense" App if my friends could understand English, I would certainly tell them to purchase your Apps Thanks for your time." thank you!!
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 9
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