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Сообщение от netomarcus - English

    • Frends and loneliness

    • Some people do not like to spend time with other people. I do.
    • But that does not mean that I do not like to stay alone for long periods of time.
  • I think both alternatives have attractive reasons to choose what to do with my time.
    • There is many things that I prefer to do alone, without company.
    • I like to study alone, for example.
  • I know sharing knowledge is essential when studying, but I think there is a right time for that.
    • In the first moment, I lean forward to do it by my own.
    • I like to read the textbook, take notes, think about the subject.
    • Then, I can discuss the substance with other people, but this first moment it is only me and the book.
    • I do not go to psychoanalysis sessions.
    • I tried to do that, but it just does not work for me.
  • When I have an introspective question, when I am doubtful about life or any metaphysical matter, I meditate.
    • I have the ability to stay sited hours long just thinking about life and death, the meaning of life, that stuff.
  • These are things that we cannot bother our friends with.
    • Everbody has these thoughts and chats about them seldom are conclusive.
  • Self-knowledge is very important and it is only possible to acquire facing yourself.
  • Otherwise, friends are awesome.
    • They are awesome to have fun.
    • I cannot imagine go to beach or anything like that alone.
  • Good moments are supposed to be shared.
    • Friends can make the most trivial routine, like order a pizza and watch a movie something special.
    • The student times are unforgettable, not because you learn a bunch of new subjects, yet because of the friends you make.
  • Knowledge can be found in books, friends cannot.
    • You have to live, go out, to make them.
  • Beside the metaphysical matter, friends are the best people you can find to ask advice.
  • True friends want the best of your life and they know you more than anyone else.
  • They can see beyond our stubbornness.
  • My friends are used to the way I proceed and they are capable to foresee the stupid things that I am about to do.
    • Listening to your friends, this is good advice.
    • In essence, there is no general rule about how spend your time.
    • I have friends who talk about life and death to me, and I listen them.
  • Every person works in one way.
  • Every person knows what is better for them.
    • To me, the best thing is put things on a balance and try to spend good times with my friends, bother them the less I can and do what I alone what I do better alone.

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