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  • Today, I was so happy.
  • I met a famous woman.
  • Her name is Hai Au.
  • She wrote a famous book.
    • Her daughter studied at Harvard University School.
    • She worked at White House with President Obama.
  • Her house was very big.
  • She had 3 dogs.
    • One of them was 13 years old. It was white.
    • Mrs. Hai Au taught me how to read a book and must choose what kinds of books.
    • She had many books and she was kind and friendly.
    • She took me one part of a big cake.
  • It was a French cake.
    • It made from mango and it was really nice.
  • She loved children like me so much.
    • Her house like a forest, There were many birds.
    • They came there and ate rice what that she took them.

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