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  • Benedict Cumberbatch- my favourite actor

    • Benedict Cumberbatch- my favourite actor All the people have their favourite composers, TV presenters, singers, actors.
    • I am not an exception.
    • I also have my idols in different areas, but I want to tell you about my favourite actor - Benedict Cumberbatch.
    • Benedict Cumberbatch is an English.
    • He was born 19 July 1976 in London.
    • His most acclaimed roles include William Pitt in the historical film Amazing Gracek, Bernard in Small Island and Sherlock Holmes in the modern BBC adaptation series Sherlock.
    • I like this actor because his characters are strong personalities, people who value friendship, which is admirable.
    • In my opinion, this is the reason for his popularity in many countries.
    • Benedict Cumberbatch became my favorite actor, not only because of his acting, but also because of his behaviour in public: he does not put himself above all he is a very talented actor. his game leads to an inexplicable interest from the moment that his face appears on the screen, accompanied by delight to the end..
    • At the moment the actor continues filming and just lives his life.

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    • Benedict Cumberbatch- my favourite actor All the people have their favourite composers, TV presenters, singers, actors.
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    • Benedict Cumberbatch- is my favourite actor.¶All the people have their favourite composers, TV presenters, singers, and actors.
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    • Benedict Cumberbatch- is my favourite actor
      All the      . Many people have theira favourite actor, composers, TV presenters, singers, actors.television personality, musician, etc.¶
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    • I also have my idols in different areas, but I want to tell you about my favourite actor - Benedict Cumberbatch.
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    • I alsoWhile I have my "idols" in different areas, butother in other areas of endeavor, I want to tell you about my favourite actor -, Benedict Cumberbatch.
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    • He was born 19 July 1976 in London.
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    • He was born 19on July 19, 1976 in London.
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    • He was born 19 July 1976 in London.in London on 19 July 1976.¶

      NOTE: @missskylie - In most of the world it is QUITE ACCEPTABLE & perfectly correct to arrange dates accordingly: DAY MONTH YEAR. Only in the USA are we (you - I now live in France) "stuck" on expressing dates according to MONTH DAY YEAR. Make a note of that as MOST of the folks @ PolyGlot are more likely to adhere to the DAY MONTH YEAR (or even) YEAR MONTH DAY format. ¶
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    • His most acclaimed roles include William Pitt in the historical film Amazing Gracek, Bernard in Small Island and Sherlock Holmes in the modern BBC adaptation series Sherlock.
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    • His most acclaimed roles include William Pitt in the historical film Amazing Gracek, Bernard in Small Island, and Sherlock Holmes in the modern BBC adaptation series Sherlock.
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    • His most acclaimed roles include "William Pitt" in the historical film Amazing Gracek, "Bernard" in the film Small Island, and "Sherlock Holmes" in the modern BBC adaptatBBC television seriesal Sherlock.
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    • I like this actor because his characters are strong personalities, people who value friendship, which is admirable.
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    • I like this actor because his characters arhave strong personalities, people who and they value friendship, which is admirable.
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    • I like this actor because hie portrays characters arewith strong personalities, and people who value friendship, which isboth admirable traits.
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    • Benedict Cumberbatch became my favorite actor, not only because of his acting, but also because of his behaviour in public: he does not put himself above all he is a very talented actor. his game leads to an inexplicable interest from the moment that his face appears on the screen, accompanied by delight to the end..
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    • Benedict Cumberbatch became my favorite actor, not only because of his acting, but also because of his behaviour in public: he does not put himself above all even though he is a very talented actor. hHis game leads to an inexplicable interest from the moment that his face appears on the screen, accompanied by delight to the end..
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    • Benedict Cumberbatch became my favorite actor, not only because of his acting, but also because of his behaviour in public: he does not put himself above all he is a very talented actor. his game leads to an inexplicable interest from the moment that his face appears on the screen, accompanied by delight to the end..

      NOTE: my advice is to break up this "statement" into multiple -- @ least three -- separate sentences. It is TOO LONG and DENSE as it stands.
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    • At the moment the actor continues filming and just lives his life.
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    • At the moment, the actor continues filming and just livesing his life. ¶
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    • At the moment the actor continues filming and justThese days he's making films and getting on with his life.¶

      NOTE: Past the "making films" element, what WOULD HE BE DOING if not just continuing to       lives his life. ¶
      ???? Really....¶

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