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- Hello everybody :-) My name is Omelette. i'm 18 years old i live in Thailand, my town is beautiful country!
- i want to learn all language in the world if i can please help me, i can help you about thai if you want!
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- Hello everybody :-) My name is Omelette. i'm 18 years old i live in Thailand, my town is beautiful country!
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- Hello everybody :-)¶My name is Omelette. iI'm 18 years old¶i and I live in Thailand~~, m~~. My town is very beautiful. ~~country!~~
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- i want to learn all language in the world if i can please help me, i can help you about thai if you want!
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- ¶iIf I can, I want to learn all languages in the world ~~if i can ¶~~.¶So please help me, iI can help you about ~~thai if~~everything you want! to.
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