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- new girl on this website
Hello !
- I would like improve my english's level.
- So, i write here to have your help.
- I am a teenager and the next year, i must have a very good english for my business school.
- For the moment, the BAC wait me. Thanks you.

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- Hello !
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句子 2
- I would like improve my english's level.
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- I would like to improve my eEnglish's level.
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- I would like improve my ~~english's level~~level of English.
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- I would like improve my eEnglish~~'s level~~.
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句子 3
- So, i write here to have your help.
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- So~~, i~~ I write here to ~~have~~get your help.
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- So, iI'm writeing here to ~~have your~~get some help.
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- I am a teenager and the next year, i must have a very good english for my business school.
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- I am a teenager and the next year, iI must ~~have a~~be very good ein English for my business school.
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- I a'm a teenager, and ~~the~~by next year, ~~i must~~I'll need to have a very good elevel of English for my business school.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4
句子 5
- For the moment, the BAC wait me. Thanks you.
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- ~~For~~At the the moment, the BAC await mes. Thanks you.
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