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- Hiiiii!
- I am from Spain, i am nineteen years old, and i would like to learn this language.
- I am new in this comunity and i trust make good friens here, good afternoon. ;)

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- Hiiiii!
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- Hi~~iiii~~!
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- I am from Spain, i am nineteen years old, and i would like to learn this language.
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- I am from Spain, iI am nine-teen years old, and iI would like to learn this language.
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- I am from Spain~~, i~~. I am nineteen years old, and iI would like to learn ~~this language~~English.
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- I am new in this comunity and i trust make good friens here, good afternoon. ;)
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- I am new in this community, and iI trust that I will make good friends here,. Have a good afternoon. ;)
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